I have learnt to use interesting words to make my writing more fascinating for readers to enjoy. My digital learning shows similes. What I enjoyed about this was getting creative with colours especially in my fonts used. The challenges I found were finding the interesting words to use because there were so many words to choose from. What I might do differently next time is use a different selection of words.
What interesting words might you use?
Describing a Hot Air Balloon
The patterns are creative like an artist's inspiration. The beautiful colours are as bright as the sun shining. The sunset/sunrise is so beautiful like a dark red rose. The desert town below is looking like a peaceful little village. The shallow rocky river is flowing gracefully like the ocean waves. The amount of balloons flying in the sky is like the amount of children in a school. The day sky is blending into the nightfall just like blending pastels and paint. The clouds look so fluffy and white like husky fur. The interesting view in the sky is so lovely like a field full of all kinds of beautiful flowers.
Amazing blog post Tina. I love the way you described what you were learning and that you're already thinking of your next steps. You've used so many interesting words. Where did you find them? Have you ever used a thesaurus?
ReplyDeleteHi Phil,thank you for your questions. I don't think I have used a thesaurus before but I will next time. The words I used were from memory from watching movies and reading books.
DeleteTina, you have used really interesting words to describe the hot air balloons and the setting of the balloons. I really like the way you have used language features to keep it interesting for the reader.
ReplyDeleteHi Miss Loney,thank you for your kind words.
DeleteWhat a beautiful piece of writing you have written Tina. You are a simile superstar!
ReplyDeleteThank you Miss Grigg for your lovely compliment.
DeleteWow Tina! What an amazing piece of writing! Similes are an awesome way to describe things such as hot air balloons and they are really fun to read as well. Great job!
ReplyDeleteThanks Madie for the encouraging words.
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